FenirArts's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Starlock Ep1 Pt1]

Terrible audio but god damn you had me at the bartender literally being an entire ear.

Head-cheese responds:

Yeah, flash seems to butcher any audio I import. I have the original sounds so if I can manage to get a better program ( or find a way around it) I'll be able to update it all with the higher qualities. Thanks for the feedback!!
(Edit: I've tried something that might have fixed the sound quality! Thanks again for your input!!)

[FURRY APOCALYPSE]

Fucking a lol..

[DIMENSION4L EP2 Preview]

I went and watched the first episode along with this, and while personally its not a story I'll follow but I'm dropping this rating because I know how hard projects like this are and the effort and production value is high quality.

[Test Character - Sunet]

Good for a test, would be awesome to see final of real characters.

[Short : Dramatic Stick Fight Scene]

It's alright, one thing I would like to say about this is your water mark, if you want it in there to protect your videos thats fine, heck I do it. But you gotta make it more subtle for it becomes a distraction to the viewer trying to watch it. Best of luck!

KenAnimates responds:

alrighty i will probably make it smaller and add text instead :D

[Do any other YouTubers have this problem?]

This is due to the algorithm of YouTube, channels below 1,000 subscribers seldom get in anyone's recommendations and disperse quite quickly among the amount of other videos. They also prefer regularly updating channels as well.

Edit Response: If you are looking for that kind of feedback is simply the animations need improvement. I would start though with improving the art of the characters, backgrounds, etc.
There is an almost endless supply across the internet of how to draw and drawing process videos that can help.

stevetherapper responds:

Thanks for the feedback, expect you gave 4 stars without explaining what I can do better.

Edit: Just because you said “I would” doesn’t really mean I should. Besides, I would just put Edit. :) I used phone and KineMaster so it was hard!

[Sherlock Hound: In Media Res Study]

How do you do that slow camera movements?

9Hammer responds:

The subtle camera movements were done using Toon Boom's Peg->Camera combination. With that, I'm able to move the camera around freely with keyframes and Beziers. Here, I used it to at least capture the background and provide a visually mellow feel, as you previously mentioned!

[Scottish Pokememes animated]

Pog mo thoin.

[TV Paint Final]

1+ for doing this in photoshop.

HeyLezl responds:

thanks!

[COSMO COMBO: Victor and Sintel Pilot episode]

Not bad but the ground movement on the clip of her walking needs to be slowed down. Its going faster then her feet.

AguRex responds:

Yup... I definitely I agree. Was too lazy to correct it.